Great concept to look like she is whipping around or maybe finishing a kick of some sort. It is a little weird though...looks like seeing it is to have just missed an amazing power move or action shot.
Just my opinion...still a great costume and you look the part but there is just something.
The best example I can give you would be for a comic artist to draw a fight scene, which two of the panels are the hero knocking out the villain and the next of the villain laying out on the street and the hero standing over him - fight finished. With that, then an editor coming in and taking out that knockout punch shot and leaving the story to play out, with the reader showing up at the last panel, wondering what just happened.
Keep it up and hang in there...you are doing amazing stuff...this one just didn't hold up for me personally.